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Post Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 10:09 pm Post subject: Story i'm workin on check it out...
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Alright its more of a kid book for my old school, 15 years old now. but anyways I can't help but too show it off a bit Razz
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Star Wars:
The Adventures of
Jekkun Ivota
Prologue
There is a miner in the outer rim, completelly clueless as too what awaits his future. The Jedi are all but wiped out, and the few remaining are hidden deep within the galaxy. This young miner is about to learn something that is both shocking, and great about himself, he will face his destiny, along with those that follow him...
Chapter 1
"Would you relax already? Just because the rebellion uses Corellian Corvettes doesn't meen the Empire is gonna say 'Sith Spit! Theres a rebel corvette, shoot it!'."
Jekkun Ivota looked up from the floor at Idani, "I guess so, but just think 'if', didn't you hear about what happened too that one vette' over Tatooine!?" "Yeah, but so what, they'll see our codes and keep patroling, I'm tellin' you, you need too relax." Jekkun staired at the wall thinking. "Yeah, your right. Hey! You wanna go shoot asteroids with the turrets? They may be old republic salvage but atleast they shoot." Jekkun said, jumping off his barrack. "Yeah sure, race ya there." Quickly Idani took off down the corridors towards the turret bay. "You guys better leave those turrets alone, or Captain will space you before you can even run!" Shaona yelled as they wizzed by her. "That old schutta won't find out!"
Hours later, Idani and Jekkun were just leaving a mining vessel outside of the Jeenosi when an Imperial Star Destroyer came out of hyperspace right in front of the Jeenosi. At the time Jekkun and Idani were flying back too the Jeenosi in a weapon-less Y-Wing fighter, exactly when the Star Destroyer opened fire on the Jeenosi. "Wh- what the hell is going on!?" Jekkun spat stopping their Y-Wing. Idani turned around and looked at the one-sided battle, "Holy..." Idani amazed gazed at the Star Destroyer as it pummeled the small corvette. "Can't we do something!?" Jekkun exclaimed turning too Idani. "What can we do? We haven't any weapons on this ship, none the less on us." "Damnit, your right, this thing has a hyperdrive right?" "Yeah...but I can't believe what I'm seeing...what if Shaona is still on the Jeenosi what about Captain...if they dont get out of there...they're all gonna die." "Theres no point in floating around, we may be next." "Yeah, your right go ahead make a big jump too the Y'Toub system, we'll hide out and figure things out on Nar Shadaa." Idani said sitting back down securely in his seat.
Chapter 2
Hours later Idani and Jekkun came out of hyperspace in the Y'Toub system. "Alright let's just hope they don't find us here." Idani said as they came in through the atmosphere for landing. Their Y-Wing came in for landing on a unoccupied landing pad in the Refugee Sector of Nar Shadaa. "Alright, just gotta sell these jump suits, the Y-Wing, and anything else inside it. Then we'll head out and start buying clothes, a new ship, some food and drinks, and two blasters, maybe a vibroknife." Idani said jumping out of the Y-Wing and into the stench of Nar Shadaa. "Yeah, one last thing you forgot, what if we dont get all the money we need too buy a new ship!" "Oh yeah...alright fine, we'll just get some creeda while we're around. Meen time I'll see if I can find a place too live. You go find a blaster or something useful like that", Idani said handing Jekkun a 103 credits, "I saved that much, we're going to spit it." "Alright, I'll meet you back at this landing pad in one standard hour, go ahead and sell the ship, no telling if the Empire could track it here, if they are looking too get rid of everything and everyone at that mining colony." "Good idea, see you in an hour." Idani said walking off the landing pad. Alright let's see, find a blaster or something..., Jekkun thought. Suddenly he heard blaster fire coming from the corner across the landing pad bridge, almost exactly after he heard it he bolted off towards the gunfight. Three trandoshans and four poorly dressed humans were blasting each other, but he noticed one was not firing a blaster, but instead he was sitting with his legs crossed and his eyes closed. By the time he stopped pondering about the man, he turned too the trandoshans too see them being shot down within twenty seconds. Jekkun started too wonder how they pulled that off so fast, but then he figured out where he was going to find those blasters. "Oh, lucky day!" He said jogging toward the corner. "Hey, you want their things?" One of the men said, nodding at the remains of the trandoshans. "You bet I do!" Jekkun said delightfully almost in a perky manner. "Huh, alright we got all the blasters we need, we got a family that could put good use too their clothes though, but help yourself too the rest of the stuff." He said cracking a faint, bland smile. Jekkun thanked him, and couldn't help but too notice the man that was sitting was staring at him constantly, with the look of something on his mind. Jekkun grab the blasters and belts and strapped them too himself, continuing too monitor the conspicuous man without being detected. "There is no need to be nervous, friend." The man said walking toward him as his brown bangs jumped with each step he took. "I'm afraid I haven't seen someone like you in quite some time." "What exactly is that supposed too meen?" "Perhaps you would like too learn? Come with me and I'll explain it more privately."
Chapter 3
Deep within the refugee sector, Jekkun arrived at the man's home, which was roughly worthy of being considered a home. The stench was lessened slightly within it, yet it was still a load of scrap and an awning slapped together with a bedroll, fireplace that was made from the cockpit of a speeder, a crate and a drive fin being held up by two crates. "Wow, some place you got here." Jekkun said looking around thinking the exact opposite of what he had just said. "No need too be over-complimentary." The man said smiling. "So what did you want too talk too me about?" "It will be hard to explain, do you know what the Force is, Jekkun?" "What? You meen that old republic religion? Yeah why?" "You are strong with it, the Force that is." "Wow, that's really something, are you sane?" "Of course I am, but I don't think you understand. You have the potential too become a servant of the Force. A Jedi..." A million thoughts broke loose within his head, one of them knowing what was going too happen now. "I'm not sure what too say." Jekkun finally stated. "I'm not suprised, I will not be able too look after you though, you understand this?" "Yes uh...I guess..., Through all of the decisions which came down too two, one was decided...I'm going to become a Jedi, "Yes, of course." Jekkun said with a prepared look about him. "Hmm, very well then...I should let you know how it will be from now on. You will call me master, and you wont be in need of a blaster." The man said slowly standing up generally revealing his age. "First off I need to introduce myself, I am Vios Jolii, Master Jolii." "I am Jekkun Ivota, Master Jolii." Jekkun said already using his master's title. "You have joined the Jedi, I'm going to give you the tool of the Jedi, the lightsaber." Master Jolii said walking over too a broken plasteel cylinder. He waved his hand and it opened perfectly, he reached in and pulled out a handheld stick with a switch on it, other than that it was quite bland. "It isn't the most beautiful lightsaber but it will serve as your training saber until you build a new one."
{U}Jek is actually mike i knew this ages ago, but mike has now slipped up hence Mitchell...
EDIT: WTF, sorry for the double topic post.
