Theory - "hypothesis: a tentative theory about the natural world; a concept that is not yet verified but that if true would explain certain facts or phenomena; "a scientific hypothesis that survives experimental testing becomes a scientific theory"; "he proposed a fresh theory of alkalis that later was accepted in chemical practices""
I'll pick out the dodgy bits of your proposed document and let you make up your mind from there;
In the American vernacular, "theory" often means "imperfect fact"
When non-biologists talk about biological evolution they often confuse two different aspects of the definition. On the one hand there is the question of whether or not modern organisms have evolved from older ancestral organisms or whether modern species are continuing to change over time.
First hand is Evolution, second hand is adaption
Its clear as daylight to see gradual change in all species, because of the terms of Survival of the fittest, and that, is infact Adaption
However, biologists readily admit that they are less certain of the exact mechanism of evolution
certainty is proof, proof is fact
Facts are the world's data. Theories are structures of ideas that explain and interpret facts
Facts are infact Data displayed with a short description and then an example to display that fact. Theories are concepts and ideas placed to explain scientific reasoning where there is no fact. In this case, how we are Human in the first place.
And humans evolved from ape-like ancestors whether they did so by Darwin's proposed mechanism or by some other yet to be discovered
Which is just disproving both their and your ideas that Evolution is infact a Fact
Moreover, "fact" doesn't mean "absolute certainty"
This is probably the whole documents best point.
There is no such thing as fact in the first place, in the sense of the word.
We as humans deduce facts from observation and calculation.
However all our measurements and equations are derived from basic functions of measurement, time in seconds, distance in meters etc
All of our measurements have been created by a race which in itself is not the be all and end all, therefore everything has to be infact relative and not absolute
What I describe as fact in this case is what everyone can Agree on, and no one can disagree on, because all our optimum measurements and calculations will infact point in the same direction.
Evolutionists have been very clear about this distinction of fact and theory from the very beginning, if only because we have always acknowledged how far we are from completely understanding the mechanisms (theory) by which evolution (fact) occurred. Darwin continually emphasized the difference between his two great and separate accomplishments: establishing the fact of evolution, and proposing a theory--natural selection--to explain the mechanism of evolution.
If mechanisms are a vital part to a fact, then a fact cannot be fact without all its parts being facts, therefore Evolution is still a theory.
And ill end it with three things
Your great Darwin, died a Christian, and said something along these lines in his old age "I regret creating such a theory"
If a theory was proven fact, the world would have no choice but to accept it, and it would create a landslide amount of anarchy for a while, but thats acceptable, people have to accept fact, or they are crazy
And lastly, please please, question exactly what you are believing in, religion or evolution