Deus Ex Alpha

Finally completed.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jZheMZi8Pa0

lol looked good

You coul have done better.

Napalm wrote:You coul have done better.

Always open for crits, explain.

00:19 Only 2 nsf start running because others are bots. The following scene of only this 2 players running is quite patethic.
00:37 A soldier turn and run in an innatural way.
01:23 Only 2 soldiers although everyone saw like 10 at teh dock.
01:58 Denton doesn't react.
02:38 The chair is too much far from the desk
02:50 -> 03:20 The fight doesn't looks real. The nsfs runs away, one of them kill his own mate and jc's bro stad up with a gun but don't shoot ( where did he take this gun from ? ).
03:24 Jc's bro stands like an idiot.
03:31 The door is open but in 03:32 it is closed though none touched it.
03:35 What was the terrorist waiting for shoot jc ?
03:45 The terrorist get killed and doesn't shoot with his pistol.
04:10 White bushes are horrible
05:52 You should have put in this scene 2 - 4 persons going away and leaving jc alone.


But the video it's ok anyway

The panning of the mouse is quite poor, as you're dragging the mouse accross the mouse mat, especially clear at 1:46 where you look up at Paul, you look up and like shake the mouse lol.

Other than that, good video.

Who's the dead guy outside the graveyard at 6:03?

Alex wrote:Who's the dead guy outside the graveyard at 6:03?

Maybe Paul pressed fire and respawned ?

Alex wrote:Who's the dead guy outside the graveyard at 6:03?

What? Wait a second.


=Edit= Oh shit.

Napalm wrote:00:19 Only 2 nsf start running because others are bots. The following scene of only this 2 players running is quite patethic.
00:37 A soldier turn and run in an innatural way.
01:23 Only 2 soldiers although everyone saw like 10 at the dock.
01:58 Denton doesn't react.
02:38 The chair is too much far from the desk
02:50 -> 03:20 The fight doesn't looks real. The nsfs runs away, one of them kill his own mate and jc's bro stad up with a gun but don't shoot ( where did he take this gun from ? ).
03:24 Jc's bro stands like an idiot.
03:31 The door is open but in 03:32 it is closed though none touched it.
03:35 What was the terrorist waiting for shoot jc ?
03:45 The terrorist get killed and doesn't shoot with his pistol.
04:10 White bushes are horrible
05:52 You should have put in this scene 2 - 4 persons going away and leaving jc alone.


But the video it's ok anyway

Most of these problems are inescapable. I can't count on all of my cast members to be there at one time. As for 01:23, that can be explained by dock guards, and the fact that there were two cast members available.

lol I really enjoyed it, but there is a long tracking shots at the beginning, like the rider in the distance in lawrence of arabia, waitin for the NSF to get to their target... it was fun when they did... maybe some shots too long, could use more cutaways and speed up the narrative... but I enjoyed it, it was fun... a massacre...

Nice job.

Do you mind if I tell my friends about this? They're into filming, especially of the video game variety.

cataclyzm wrote:Do you mind if I tell my friends about this? They're into filming, especially of the video game variety.

Sure.