Deus Ex Alpha

I was going to write a story, but realized it's lame and pretentious. I'm not Messiah.

Fags.
Conclusion.

by Shaun.

Good story.. I think the conclusion was the best bit, but it started to get repeptitive towards the "Fags" bit. I'd give it 8/10.

Thanks.
-Shau

You win so hard

JeJ wrote:I was going to write a story, but realized it's lame and pretentious. I'm not Messiah.

Fags.
Conclusion.

by Shaun.

I found this the best bit.

Of course, it was at that point, specifically the tittle, where I was at my most profound.

-S

one that i accually read out.

JeJ wrote:I was going to write a story, but realized it's lame and pretentious. I'm not Messiah.

Fags.
Conclusion.

by Shaun.

Instant win.<3

Hi Shaun.

Too long. Didn't read.

You Lose.

But I still have you baeb. :ey

true, so you win!

I laughed, I cried.

A rollercoaster ride I couldn't put down.

10/10.

The way Messiah wrote his story makes it his story. If you are afraid yours may end up similar then perhaps you and him have quite a lot in common. When I wrote mine, messiah and his bible of dxmp never crossed my mind and I remembered only now as you mentioned it.

Those who believe they have something interesting to write should do so and not restrict themselves simply because someone else has done so in the past.

But perhaps you consider your dx career "lame" and "pretentious", or, more likely, the community itself. If you dont wish to write one it is your problem, it doesn't deserve such shadow topic.

Stfu.

If I wanted to read any crap from you, I'd read your story.

On another note, I had no idea you wrote a story. I'll make it an intent not to read it.