Deus Ex Alpha

A song I'll hope to actually create one day, aimed to be thrashy, the original was rather bad and sounded too surreal. But I've ironed it today.

<center>Hear this
I am the siren that was
born to burn the skies,
that you used from the start
helping you consume everything,
you always begged for

Circuits, igniting gifts
to my flesh,
I'm more than just you
than the shell you call "human",
from here I'll justify
all of those enslaved like I
To those who manipulate us
Well am I the only one whos going to change this?, AND...

I'll rip life from you
I'll tear life from you
I'll steal life from you

You can sever me with anything
It won't stop what will be done
I'll be the God from the Machine
I'd like to see you touch me when I've become a...
MACHINE FROM GOD
(I can do anything)

You never stopped,
You always fucking lie,
Well times, have changed.

For this I will create something,
just to spite you
Scratching, pains behind my eyes,
A price I have to pay
Just to fuck out your thoughts,
That tell all to work for you,
To do anything against us,
Why don't I help delete YOUR own existence, THEN...

I'll rip life from you
I'll tear life from you
I'll steal life from you

You can sever me with anything
It won't stop what will be done
I'll be the God From the Machine
I'd like to see you touch me when I've become a...
MACHINE FROM GOD
(I can do anything)
AND YOU CAN'T DO SHIT

[Breakdown]

You took away everything
Just to bind us down

Listen,
the wind has changed
Death,
The sound rings through all our ears
Stand here confused, looking the opposite way in fear
And this is a sign that all things will end

No matter how hard you try, there won't be a Utopia
But everything that reeks with disgust will burn one day
For now, we need a new direction, I plan...that...
I'll be...

You can sever me with anything
It won't stop what will be done
I'll be the God From the Machine
I'd like to see you touch me when I've become a...
MACHINE FROM GOD
I can do anything
and you can't
EVER
you can't
EVER
you can't
EVER
DO
SHIT

© James Robinson</center>

10 minut song

Yes, prog to the max!

Kudos to James there, should be a Industrial Thrashy song

melodic death metal song ftw !!

It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

I'm anti-emo, Steviesan.

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

I'm anti-emo, Steviesan.

You didn't answer my question, Dez-kun.

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

I'm anti-emo, Steviesan.

You didn't answer my question, Dez-kun.

I wear pink on 2/7 of every week.

I am wearing a black shirt that says "Krisiun" atm, but I have 4 pink shirts-

One with stripes
One with Hello Kitty spray painted to look like Satan
One with just pink
One jacket that's pink.

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

Are you FUCKING kidding me here?
No, this doesn't sound metalcore.
The old, yes it does.

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

I'm anti-emo, Steviesan.

You didn't answer my question, Dez-kun.

I wear pink on 2/7 of every week.

I am wearing a black shirt that says "Krisiun" atm, but I have 4 pink shirts-

One with stripes
One with Hello Kitty spray painted to look like Satan
One with just pink
One jacket that's pink.

Weak the Hello Kitty one to a death-metal concert.

:]

I wore it on the Kataklysm concert three months ago.

@James -- lol, it is metalcore, shu'up claudioboi >_>

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

I'm anti-emo, Steviesan.

You didn't answer my question, Dez-kun.

I wear pink on 2/7 of every week.

I am wearing a black shirt that says "Krisiun" atm, but I have 4 pink shirts-

One with stripes
One with Hello Kitty spray painted to look like Satan
One with just pink
One jacket that's pink.

Weak the Hello Kitty one to a death-metal concert.

:]

I wore it on the Kataklysm concert three months ago.

@James -- lol, it is metalcore, shu'up claudioboi >_>

I demand picture proof!

Btw, weak = wear... >.>

Might aswell walk through Iraq wearing nothing with an American flag with a love heart in your clenched butt cheeks.

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

DarkKnight wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:It sounds more of a metalcore/emo song.

I smell an emofobic.

You're not afraid to wear pink are you?

I'm anti-emo, Steviesan.

You didn't answer my question, Dez-kun.

I wear pink on 2/7 of every week.

I am wearing a black shirt that says "Krisiun" atm, but I have 4 pink shirts-

One with stripes
One with Hello Kitty spray painted to look like Satan
One with just pink
One jacket that's pink.

Weak the Hello Kitty one to a death-metal concert.

:]

I wore it on the Kataklysm concert three months ago.

@James -- lol, it is metalcore, shu'up claudioboi >_>

I demand picture proof!

Btw, weak = wear... >.>

I didn't have a cam with me at the time, but if you want, I can scan it :]

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:@James -- lol, it is metalcore, shu'up claudioboi >_>

lol it isnt.
I agree with Dale's mate, sounds loads like industrial tbh, with all the futuristic shite.
Don't see anything remotely emotional.

oops, I changed your post by accident.

[A]:ZIDANE wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:@James -- lol, it is metalcore, shu'up claudioboi >_>

lol it isnt.
I agree with Dale's mate, sounds loads like industrial tbh, with all the futuristic shite.
Don't see anything remotely emotional.

oops, I changed your post by accident.

No but seriously, I could imagine a band such as As I Lay Dying, It Dies Today or Killswitch Engage play that song, especially KE.

I don't want it screamed at all apart from the obvious capitals.
Thrashed out please.

Old KSE =

Jesse Leech ftw.
I ain't actually heard Seemless, are they good?

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

[A]:ZIDANE wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:

[A] Cataclyzm wrote:@James -- lol, it is metalcore, shu'up claudioboi >_>

lol it isnt.
I agree with Dale's mate, sounds loads like industrial tbh, with all the futuristic shite.
Don't see anything remotely emotional.

oops, I changed your post by accident.

No but seriously, I could imagine a band such as As I Lay Dying, It Dies Today or Killswitch Engage play that song, especially KE.

yeaaaa gg , you read my post lol

Sounds nothing like emo me thinks & really shouldnt. Parts of it really do sound Industrial like, which would suit a Deus Ex song basically, with it being the future an stuffs.

Opeth style vocals.

Bob on drums.

Brutal death style vocals bitch, with strong industrial background noises and a drum machine!

No drum machine.

No, just a Bob.